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Unclesam Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

please help on my motivation letter for internship

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00I'm writing a motivation letter for internship in USA, since I'm not so well in letter writing, and have a feeling that it misses smth important and02br
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00I would like a professional eye to look on it. Other sad thing is the deadline for sending it is this week, so quick, brief or02br
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00any comments, suggestions and critics are very welcome. OK, here goes:02br
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00Vilnius, 9 January 200702br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I am writing to apply for participation in [internship program name] in ******, USA.02br
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00My name is [name], a flexible and highly motivated student at Vilnius University, Lithuania, currently studying in the second year of a four year bachelor’s degree in computer science.02br
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00I was always willing to participate in creating outstanding products that reach professional and home environments worldwide, also giving an enjoyable feeling that I have a part in it. I believe that internship in your company, working in both creative and challenging environment, will provide an opportunity for gaining a valuable experience to build strong foundations for professional programming skills and will acquire new contacts, invaluable for my further career. Further more, working abroad, provides a rare possibility to see things from the outside, from a completely different angle, that I believe, is extremely important in professional and cultural backgrounds. 02br
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00Personally, I define myself as a dynamic and creative, goal-oriented team player, eager to give the most of myself to achieve the best results possible. Also I am currently working as C/C++ teacher.02br
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00I am confident that being familiar with different programming language climates, teamwork and teaching C/C++ experience01b00 02b00gives me enough knowledge and I will make me a good candidate for this internship, taking as much as possible from it.02br
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00Thank you very much for your time and consideration of my application. I am looking forward to your positive response.02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00[name]02br
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02br 02br 00My interest lies in the development and creation of outstanding software products that targets professional and home markets. If you allow me this internship at your company, it will provide me with an ideal opportunity to gain invaluable experience and expand my programming skills into specific markets. This will ensure a solid foundation for a future career in this field.

  • 02br 02br 00My interest lies in the development and creation of outstanding software products that targets professional and home markets.
  • If you allow me this internship at your company, it will provide me with an ideal opportunity to gain invaluable experience and expand my programming skills into specific markets.
  • This will ensure a solid foundation for a future career in this field.
  • 02br 02br 00Personally I define myself as dynamic, creative and confident.
  • 02br 02br 00[name]0-
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0My suggestion:02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I hereby apply for the [internship] [program name] at your company.02br
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00I am a second year student at Vilnuis University, Lithuania currently studying towards a four year bachelors degree in computer science.02br
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00My interest lies in the developmen
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0Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I hereby apply for the [internship] [program name] at your company.02br
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00I am a second year student at Vilnuis University, Lithuania currently studying towards a four year bachelors degree in computer science.02br
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00My interest lies in the development and creation of outstanding software product
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0 thank you very much for your help:)02br
00i really appreciate it 0-

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