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Could you please help me with this?1 You know what time it is?/what the time is?2 Its not like Fridays are any different from Mondays for people who don't work.3 If you tell someone that doesn't know its your birthday on the day of, they'll feel bad more than anything for not having wished you it.4 The delivery service can come at anytime during the day/of the day.5 I don't care if the store is closed or open, I want it. / I couldn't care less if the store was open or not, I want it. (could you use COULDN'T CARE LESS with IF ??)6 Her feet are so big, the come of her shoes. (shoes that are open at the front, the size is too small. You get the picture? Is that how you'd say it?)thank you

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

alc24Could you please help me with this?

1 You know what time it is?/~~what the time is?~~
2 Its not like Fridays are any different from Mondays for people who don't work.
3 If you tell someone that doesn't know its your birthday on the day of your birthday, they'll feel bad ~~more than anything~~ for not having wished you ~~it.~~ happy birthday.

4 The delivery service can come at anytime during the day/~~of the day.~~
5 I don't care if the store is closed or open, I want it. / I couldn't care less if the store was open or not, I want it. (could you use COULDN'T CARE LESS with IF ??) Either would work if the person you are talking to already knows what "it" is.
6 Her feet are so big, ~~the come of her shoes~~ that the toes come out more than they should.(shoes that are open at the front, the size is too small. You get the picture? Is that how you'd say it?)

thank you

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Dimsumexpress · Answer

alc24Could you please help me with this?

1 Do You know what time it is?/~~what the time is?~~
2 Its not like Fridays are any different from Mondays for people who don't work.

More natural: For people who don't work, it makes no difference what date of the week it is.
3 If you tell someone that (who)doesn't know its your birthday on the day of, they'll feel bad more than anything for not having wished you it. (This sentence is a mess, it makes no sense grammaticall or logically)
4 The delivery service ~~can~~ may come at anytime during the day/~~of the day.~~ If you are not sure, use "may".
5 I don't care if the store is closed ~~or open~~, I want it. / I couldn't care less if the store was closed ~~open or not,~~ I want it. (could you use COULDN'T CARE LESS with IF ??)
6 Her feet are so big, that her toes are bulging out ~~the come~~ of her shoes. (shoes that are open at the front, the size is too small. You get the picture? Is that how you'd say it?)

thank you

Go over the above for comments and mistakes. # 5 is something quite rude, don't say it unless you re a brat!

Sherly · Answer

1 You know what time it is?/what the time is?
=) DO you know what time it is?
2 Its not like Fridays are any different from Mondays for people who don't work.
=) Its seem not Fridays. Is there any different about Mondays for people who do not work?
3 If you tell someone that doesn't know its your birthday on the day of, they'll feel bad more than anything for not having wished you it.
=)If you tell someone that/who doesn't know there's your birthday on that day, they'll feel apologizes.
4 The delivery service can come at anytime during the day/of the day.
=) The delivery service can come anytime on the day.
5 I don't care if the store is closed or open, I want it. / I couldn't care less if the store was open or not, I want it. (could you use COULDN'T CARE LESS with IF ??)
=)I don't care whether there are still having some stores or out of stores.
=) I'd like to have it no matter there are still having some stores or there were out of stores.
6 Her feet are so big, the come of her shoes. (shoes that are open at the front, the size is too small. You get the picture? Is that how you'd say it?)
=) The shoes aren't fix to her feet.

Dimsumexpress · Answer

sherly1 You know what time it is?/what the time is?

=) DO you know what time it is?
2 Its not like Fridays are any different from Mondays for people who don't work.

=) Its seem not Fridays. Is there any different about Mondays for people who do not work?
3 If you tell someone that doesn't know its your birthday on the day of, they'll feel bad more than anything for not having wished you it.

=)If you tell someone that/who doesn't know there's your birthday on that day, they'll feel apologizes.
4 The delivery service can come at anytime during the day/of the day.

=) The delivery service can come anytime on the day.
5 I don't care if the store is closed or open, I want it. / I couldn't care less if the store was open or not, I want it. (could you use COULDN'T CARE LESS with IF ??)

=)I don't care whether there are still having some stores or out of stores.

=) I'd like to have it no matter there are still having some stores or there were out of stores.

6 Her feet are so big, the come of her shoes. (shoes that are open at the front, the size is too small. You get the picture? Is that how you'd say it?)

=) The shoes aren't fix to her feet.

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