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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help my with my motivation letter
Hy,I need your help with my motivation letter.It is very important to me that the letter is very good . Thenks in advance
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for a student professional exchange program available in your country.Information about this program I found at the student exchange department at Faculty of Medicine in Nis,Serbia and Montenegro.
Regard our counters have rich history and cultural background, it would be unique opportunity to get education and cultural experience in addition to the regular medical knowledge. It will also help me to broad my understanding of medical and social conditions in yours country.
At the moment I am in my fifth year of studies with a total average grades of 8,16.With very good knowledge in clinical exams.I am a hard working person; committed to teamwork, always ready to take part in learning. Your personal approaches in medicine interest my very mach due to good reputation of your staff. Expirience and knowledge gendered in your clinic would be very helpful in finding a job upon returning to my country.
Yours truly, Danica
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for a student professional exchange program available in your country.Information about this program I found at the student exchange department at Faculty of Medicine in Nis,Serbia and Montenegro.
Regard our counters have rich history and cultural background, it would be unique opportunity to get education and cultural experience in addition to the regular medical knowledge. It will also help me to broad my understanding of medical and social conditions in yours country.
At the moment I am in my fifth year of studies with a total average grades of 8,16.With very good knowledge in clinical exams.I am a hard working person; committed to teamwork, always ready to take part in learning. Your personal approaches in medicine interest my very mach due to good reputation of your staff. Expirience and knowledge gendered in your clinic would be very helpful in finding a job upon returning to my country.
Yours truly, Danica
Top answer
I think you need to a) Check all of your spellings as there are several mistakes, b) Tell them what you are studying and where. Tell them about your future ambitions once you have qualified and how studying at their institution will help you achieve those ambitions. c) Tell them a little more about yourself and what benefits you can bring; why they should choose you over all the other applicants basically!
- I think you need to a) Check all of your spellings as there are several mistakes, b) Tell them what you are studying and where.
- Tell them about your future ambitions once you have qualified and how studying at their institution will help you achieve those ambitions.
- c) Tell them a little more about yourself and what benefits you can bring; why they should choose you over all the other applicants basically!
- You did well to avoid the whole 'let me tell you my life story' style though, it's better to be short and to the point than waffle on with a load of irrelevant details.
- Fix your spellings, expand on the important areas and post your amended version here for some more help.
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Hello,
This is a little bit short compared to most motivation letters.I think you need to
a) Check all of your spellings as there are several mistakes,
b) Tell them what you are studying and where. Tell them about your future ambitions once you have qualified and how studying at their institution will help you achieve those ambitions.
c) Tell them a little mo
This is a little bit short compared to most motivation letters.I think you need to
a) Check all of your spellings as there are several mistakes,
b) Tell them what you are studying and where. Tell them about your future ambitions once you have qualified and how studying at their institution will help you achieve those ambitions.
c) Tell them a little mo
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