Please help my motivation letter.

Dear all,

I would like to receive some help on my motivation letter for MBA.

I think it needs further adjustments, so I would like to kindly ask your help with it.

Dear Sir or Madam,

With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying Master of Business Administration at University of Padova. I strongly believe that my educational background, working experience, personal skills and my motivation make me a very good candidate for this program.

I graduated in July 2015 from Danang University of Economics with a bachelor of International Trade. I am confident that the years studying at this institution gave me a solid knowledge about the basic business processes on which I can build in the course of my future studies. Besides, I was a senior member of AIESEC Danang where I can apply these knowledge into real cases. During the time there, I

After graduated, I work as a ship broker at Citimarine Vietnam, a small shipping company. Although the working time is not so long, this job made me to be highly disciplined when working with foreigner clients and detailed - oriented habits. But my boss is not good at managing the company even he works very effectively individually. This demotivated me from working under poor management environment and made me want to change my career path to be a good manager.

Then I came to Malaysia and work as an Analyst there. With my purpose to learn more about managing, I have performed well and get promoted to be Subject Matter Expert of Vietnam. I have to lead a small group of eight people from different ages and it was really hard when every people have their own opinions. It began the separation when some older people have high ego and they didn’t follow what they don’t think it’s right. I have to use both soft and tough methods to ease the disconnection by combining all opinions that gave the most benefits to everyone. Beside, being a Subject Matter Expert giving me a chance to meet the project manager every weeks that helps me to understand about in sight of the project and to contribute to make a right strategy based on that project’s input. One of my ideas to reduce the handling time of Vietnamese Analysts by recognize a trending errors of Analysts about names and propose a valid surname list of Vietnamese people. It helped reduce the errors more than 50% and the handling time down from 13 seconds to 10 seconds. I’m glad that at the end of the day, I am still certain that I love to pursue my career. To me, it is not only about managing people but also inspire them. Hence, after one year having enough experiences here, I can see it’s the time for my next move.

My goal is to be the top manager of the multinational company. So I study to do that, to develop skills I need. Learning business management and administration will make me understand more about being a good manager. Managing and administration are meta-skills, and people will always need them. Learning them gives me options. Options are opportunities, and I am an absolute opportunist. I consider an International MBA to be the best move I can do for my career, and I am extremely motivated to pursue one.

My firm belief is that by studying at your highly recognized university, in the international, creative and open-minded environment that it provides I will be able to develop my existing skills, and develop new ones which will help me achieve my future plans.

Thank you for considering my application

Yours faithfully