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The white man awkwardly starts nodding his head and tapping his hands on his knees along to the beat to show that he's cool with the rap genre.
- Is this grammatical and well-written?
- Where should I put awkwardly to tell that it was both the head nodding and the hand tapping that was awkward?
- As written, does it sound like he's nodding his head on his knees?
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anonymous - Is this grammatical and well-written? He does not awkwardly start. He starts doing something, and he does that thing awkwardly.
- anonymous - Is this grammatical and well-written?
- He does not awkwardly start.
- He starts doing something, and he does that thing awkwardly.
- "Nodding his head" only starts to be "to the beat" when the reader gets to that phrase.
- The nodding seems to signify assent up till then, mystifyingly.
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anonymous- Is this grammatical and well-written?
He does not awkwardly start. He starts doing something, and he does that thing awkwardly. "Nodding his head" only starts to be "to the beat" when the reader gets to that phrase. The nodding seems to signify assent up till then, mystifyingly. "Along to the beat" is a bit off. He taps to the beat, or he taps al
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