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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help me write an effective letter to the head of an art museum

I would like to write a cover letter and send some gallery's catalogue to the head of art museum.
would you please tell me if the following is effective or not.

Dear Sir,

Please find catalogues of our artists which I hope will help you outline the gallery. PPP gallery, located in Tokyo was founded in 1985.

As seen in the catalogues, many exhibitions of artists such as KUSAMA Yayoi, .....,......,...... were produced by us and MARUYAMA, Yoshitaka and other current famous artists have held their exhibitons before they became wellknown.

Although our current situation is quite exciting and satisfing, we are much more interested in having some opportunities to introduce those artists to more people by presenting their works at your museum. I am confident it will be viewed with much interest.

Realizing that this letter and the catalogue can not adequately communicate the idea in depth, I would very much welcome the opportunity to show you the gallery as well as gallery's record.

I am looking forward to hearing from you very soon.

Sincerely yours,




Director of nabis gallery
  

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] Dear Sir: I have enclosed catalogues of our artists, which will help you outline (or better understand) our gallery. PPP Gallery, located in Tokyo, was founded in 1985. , and we have held exhibitions by MARUYAMA, Yoshitaka and other current famous artists before they became well-known.

  • ] Dear Sir: I have enclosed catalogues of our artists, which will help you outline (or better understand) our gallery.
  • PPP Gallery, located in Tokyo, was founded in 1985.
  • , and we have held exhibitions by MARUYAMA, Yoshitaka and other current famous artists before they became well-known.
  • ) artists to more people by presenting their works at your museum.
  • I am very confident that our artists' works will be very well received by your audience.
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[If I misunderstood your letter, please correct me and we can revise.]

Dear Sir:

I have enclosed catalogues of our artists, which will help you outline (or better understand) our gallery.

PPP Gallery, located in Tokyo, was founded in 1985. We have produced exhibitions by such notable artists as KUSAMA Yayoi, .....,......,......, and we have held exhibitions by MAR
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Dear Mr/Ms ? Mountainhiker,

Thank you so much for your reply and I have read it with much interest and appreciation.
You have definately well understood the concept of the letter and I think I will be able to study it so that I can write similar letters in the future more easily.

Though if i can ask you about the following:

>Although we are enjoying tremendou
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"Although we take delight in our fortunate situation,"

I think that sounds excellent. If it makes you feel more comfortable, that is even better.

I think that readers from foreign lands will appreciate the slight differences in the way letters are written. People enjoy different cultures and your letter will reflect that.

My intent in providing you with my sugges
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Dear Mountainhiker

Thank you very much for your help. It has been so prompt that things went quite smoothly plus it was a good lesson for me. i am glad that I found this website.

Thank you again,

sincerely,

Yuuki
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Yuuki,

My pleasure. I enjoy helping those who live far away from me. It makes the world seem a little smaller and more accessible.

MountainHiker

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