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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
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please help me write a sentence.

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00This is the sentence. It's a complex sentence so I want to make it easier to read.02br
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>02br 02br 00I think you'll need two sentences:02br 02br 01font 00Our country is proud of its strong internet usage, but there is a dark side to it. 02font 02br 02font 00 0-

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0 01font00<Our country is proud of being known for strong internet power but under the dark side of our society , the youths devote themselves to bloodsheds in internet cafes even though the killing is practiced in cyberspace.>02br
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0Thanks for the nice answer Feebs11.02br
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0 01font00Our country is proud of being known for strong internet power but under the dark side of our society , the youths devote themselves to bloodsheds in internet cafes even though the killing is practiced in cyberspace.02br
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00Our contry is proud of being known as a strong internet power; bu
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0Thank you Asell again. 05002br
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