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“ It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ? “

It is true that children should be taught to indentify the difference between right and wrong when they were a child. Punishment plays an integral part to know this distinction. While I accept that helping children identify the distintion between right and wrong may suit many people, I believe that punishment is not absolutely a good way.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why children must be taught instantly at an early age. One reason is that they are able to receptive , aware and obedient. When they were young, parents may easier to teach their sons or daughters from the smallest to the biggest which is morality as loyalty, kindness, open-hearted, and so forth. And parents also play an important role in their young children characters. For example, my parents criticized me for hiding money to buy toys when I was 8 years old and they taught me the quality of the truth which is crucial in my life bring out the credibility from others. And from that time, I do still remember and attempt to genuine as well as I can.

On the other hand, the option to punish children is necessary to help them learn this distinction is quite disadvantageous to some extent. The first solution would be to parents’s methods have influences on children’s mentality. Instead of threatening and grounding their sons or daughters which are hurtful to their morale till they grow up , parents should talk patiently to define the wrong way that children have. This may lead to strengthen the relationship between parents and their kids and also a good way to share and apparent to each other. As a result of much more happiness and good behavior at children.

For the reasons I mentioned above, I believe that helping children to know what’s the wrong thing they have at an early age is necessary , I do not concur with the argument that telling punishment must have to help them learn this distinction.