Please help me with Writing Task 1

The line graph gives the information about the urbanisation rate in 2 countries namely South Korea and Indonesia from 1969 to 2009.

Overall, the urbanisation rate of 2 countries decreased over the period of 40 years. We can see that the percentage of urbanisation was considerablely higher in South Korea than in Indonesia.

In 1969, there was 40 percentages of the urbanisation rate in South Korea, while the rate of urbannisation in Indonesia was stood at 20%. In the 1970s, the urbanisation rate in Indonesia experienced a slightly decline. In contrast, the figure for South Korea increased steadily. From 1979 to 1989, the proportion of urbanisation rate in both nations were gradually rose, which was 60% in South Korea and around 25% in Indonesia.

In the 1989-1990 period, the figure for Indonesia grew steadily to approximately 35%, whereas the South Korea's urbanisation climb considerablely to around 78%. By 2009, the rate of urbanisation in South Korea reached a peak of 82%, compared to about 50% of Indonesia.