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The table represents the size of forested land in many separate countries all over the world in 3 years:1990,2000,2005 . As can be seen, European area made up the highest millions of hectares of forested land, while the Oceania part presented for the smallest figure.
In 1990 to 2005 , there recorded the slight downward in North America and Oceania ,with 708 to 705 and 199 to 197 respectively . However, in period of 5 years from 2000 to 2005, the amount of forested land almost stablized with 705 hectares. The amount of forested land in Africa also dropped but significantly from 749 to 691 as well as in South America, this amount decreased sharply from 949 to 882 in 1990 to 2005 .
In contrast, in the European countries , the land planting trees had a great figure: 989 in 1990 and continued to rise in 2005, acounting to 1001. The last area which is Asia saw the unstable increase throughout 15 years from 576 in 1990 but inconsiderably decreased to 570 in 2000 and recovered in 2005 with 584.

  

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) all over the world in 3 yea rs:1990,2000,2 005 . As can be seen, missing word) European area made up (wrong word) the highest millions of hectares of forested land, while the Oceania part presented (wrong word) for the smallest figure. In 1990 to 20 05 , there recorded (wrong form) the slight downward (missing word) in North America and Ocean ia ,w ith 708 to 705 and 199 to 197 respectivel y .

  • ) all over the world in 3 yea rs:1990,2000,2 005 .
  • As can be seen, missing word) European area made up (wrong word) the highest millions of hectares of forested land, while the Oceania part presented (wrong word) for the smallest figure.
  • In 1990 to 20 05 , there recorded (wrong form) the slight downward (missing word) in North America and Ocean ia ,w ith 708 to 705 and 199 to 197 respectivel y .
  • However, in period of 5 years from 2000 to 2005, the amount of forested land almost stablized with 705 hectares.
  • The amount of forested land in Africa also dropped but significantly from 749 to 691 as well as in South Ameri ca, (comma splice error) this amount decreased sharply from 949 to 882 in 1990 to 200 5 .
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The table represents (gives, presents) the size of forested land in many separate countries (The entries are not countries.) all over the world in 3 years:1990,2000,2005 . As can be seen, missing word) European area

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