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Mankka Posted 9 years ago
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Some report have discovered the incidence of crimes / violence committed by young woman is increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations to this situation.


There has been an upsurge in the number of crimes committed by young woman. There are many underlying reasons for this hotly-debated issue, and steps should be taken to mitigate this potential problem.

One possible reason for the increase in the number of young woman breaking laws stems from the need to make ends meet. It is true that in many rural areas, many young woman have to struggle to earn a living. Committing crime can provides them with a lot of money, which is desirable. Therefore, these vulnerable woman are led astray and have proclivity for involving in drug trafficking and drug smuggling, for example, without awareness of the catastrophic consequences it may bring. Moreover, more and more woman incline to offend because they want to prove their positions in the society. For example, in many developed countries, young woman tend to drink beers, chain-smoke, drink alcohol, smoke weed and so on, which are believed to be the bad habits of men. As a result, this negative trend does exert a detrimental impact on their families as well as the society.

Many measures should be taken to tackle this issue. First of all, the government should provide rural areas with educational training. This gives people who are lack of education budget the chance to raise the awareness of social evils. As a result, this leads to the decrease in the number of crime rate, especially crimes committed by young woman because they have a deeper understanding of the undesirable impact of crimes on their own lives and the society. Furthermore, some laws should be introduced to control the tendency of young woman using alcohol because it not only affects their health but also sets a bad example for their children.

In conclusion, I believe that there are many reasons for this adverse trend, and a range of measures should be implemented as soon as possible.

  

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