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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please help me with this sentence?

Can you say PROMINENT PART OF ME like this or TAKE AHOLD OF ME?
How would you say this sentence please?

- I knew I had had premonitions but it had never happened to me while I was wide awake. Maybe as I got older, the “thing” became a more prominent part of me” Maybe as I got older it would take ahold of me.

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To answer your question: Yes, you can say "a prominent part of me" and "take ahold of me" as you wrote. I would say your passage this way, "I knew I had had premonitions but they had never happened to me while I was wide awake. Maybe as I got older, the "thing" would become a more prominent part of me .

— Hmea1

  • To answer your question: Yes, you can say "a prominent part of me" and "take ahold of me" as you wrote.
  • I would say your passage this way, "I knew I had had premonitions but they had never happened to me while I was wide awake.
  • Maybe as I got older, the "thing" would become a more prominent part of me .
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  • I changed "it" to "they" because you are referring to more than one premonition in the passage.
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To answer your question: Yes, you can say "a prominent part of me" and "take ahold of me" as you wrote.

I would say your passage this way, "I knew I had had premonitions but they had never happened to me while I was wide awake. Maybe as I got older, the "thing" would become a more prominent part of me. Maybe as I got older it would take ahold of me."
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