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Creativeguru Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please help me with this sentence

Get back more in Diamonds or Watches...

I want to communicate that if you buy jewellery you will get discount on watches and vice versa

I need simple to understand and strong sentence to communicate it.

As it's for the jewellery it should be elegant but simple

Regards,
  

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A discount is not money back; it is less money paid. Save more in diamonds and watches

  • A discount is not money back; it is less money paid.
  • Save more in diamonds and watches
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A discount is not money back; it is less money paid.

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