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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please help me with this sentence...
"That industrialization to achieve economic development has resulted in environmental degradation is a major concern in my country."
Is the sentence above grammartically correct? If not would you rearrange it please. Thank you.
Is the sentence above grammartically correct? If not would you rearrange it please. Thank you.
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" Is the sentence above grammartically correct? If not would you rearrange it please. Thank you.
- " Is the sentence above grammartically correct?
- If not would you rearrange it please.
- Thank you.
- Hi, This is how I approach it: The way it stands, it's incorrect because you have a present perfect structure and a simple present "is" clause but lacking a relative pronoun.
- I revised it as follows: The industrialization to achieve economic (prosperity) has resulted in environmental degradation, which is a major concern in my country.
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Anonymous"That industrialization to achieve economic development has resulted in environmental degradation [which] is a major concern in my country."
Is the sentence above grammartically correct? If not would you rearrange it please. Thank you.
Hi,
This is how I approach it: The way it stands, it's incorrect because
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