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Cjnitrous Posted 18 years ago
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please help me with this sentence

0here it is is it correct? what isn't right please help02br
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00The man obliged kindly as he was so impacted by such a young boy who made such a courageous act.02br
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00and could I get some help on commas? please thanks 02br
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0The man kindly obliged, as he was so impressed with such a young boy who had done such a courageous act.02br
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00Simplify stuff, or you'll sound too pompous or pretentious or too serious. Perhaps: 02br
01i01span00The man obliged, as he was impresssed by the courage of such a young boy. 02span02i02br
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0it was for a paper i had to do02br
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