Please help me with this paragraph
Hi teachers. Please help me with this paragraph. Is it OK or would you change something? Any improvement would be welcome.
Mark is chatting with some friends. He excuses himself and heads for restroom, but just before reaching it, he turns direction and slips into the stairwell.
(he wants to get to the floor above unnoticed)
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anonymous Is it OK or would you change something? Mark is chatting with some friends. He excuses himself and heads for restroom, but just before reaching it, he changes direction and dusks into the stairwell.
- anonymous Is it OK or would you change something?
- Mark is chatting with some friends.
- He excuses himself and heads for restroom, but just before reaching it, he changes direction and dusks into the stairwell.
- "Turns direction"is unidiomatic.
- "Slips" has unfortunate connotations just outside the door to the restroom.
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anonymous Is it OK or would you change something?
Mark is chatting with some friends. He excuses himself and heads for restroom, but just before reaching it, he changes direction and dusks into the stairwell.
"Turns direction"is unidiomatic. "Slips" has unfortunate connotations just outside the door to the restroom.
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