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Nana75 Posted 14 years ago
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Please help me with this paragraph
Hello, I am currently working on my cover letter. I feel that something is not right in this paragraph. The 2nd sentence is too long, but I want to say all of that. Instead of saying "one of my strengths..." should I say "another strength that I have to offer....". How can I re-write it? Thanks in advance for your feedback!
Besides my passion for teaching, one of my strengths that I have to offer is my enthusiasm when it comes to the incorporation of technology into my lessons. For my tutoring sections, for example, I like to use online games, slides shows, and video clips. These and other practices have allowed me to connect with my tutees, increase their motivation, and accelerate their learning experience.
Besides my passion for teaching, one of my strengths that I have to offer is my enthusiasm when it comes to the incorporation of technology into my lessons. For my tutoring sections, for example, I like to use online games, slides shows, and video clips. These and other practices have allowed me to connect with my tutees, increase their motivation, and accelerate their learning experience.
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