Please help me with this IELTS essay

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Please help me mark this IELTS task 2 essay.

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Topic : Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with highest marks, other say that they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

People have different views about universities should only offer young students who achieve the best scores. While some argue that all generations should be accepted by universities. I think education is a chance for everybody to change their life so why we can’t give them a chance by free pass gate for everyone who is in need? I will discuss both point of view followed by a proper reason.

There are various reasons why people believe that only the good students can enter to universities. They believe students who have high marks will prove their endeavor in studying can increase the schools’ fame. And they can assert their ability by make an effort to entrance to that universities. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that it can create a good working environment for learners and they can have a rapid development. Finally, it can be a good choice for cream of crop students who want to prove and improve themselves.

In spite of these argument, I believe that universities should open for all different ages. In my opinion, universities should give them a chance because they just maybe unlucky miss their opportunity to further their study when they have some problems or they just careless in the exams though they always been good in their study. Besides, the scores can’t prove their agency or some old people want to complete their study or enrich their knowledge.

To conclude, education is the best way to have a better life though how old are they or their authority. If the universities have a better class environment, they will still get the best learners regardless of their ages.