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Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport.

How far do you agree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that young people should take part in cultural activities like music and theatre more frequently than sport. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea.

Cultural activities bring valuable benefits to young people, which are good for the health of the mind and spirit and allow them to more be creative, more kind and have knowledge about cultural differences of the world.

Also, playing sport gives young people the chance to do exercise, which helps them become more healthy and, as a result leads to study or work more productively. Addition to, sport teaches young people about rules and teamwork, which are the better place for adolescents to coordinate with their teammates. Sport activities are less expensive than going to theatre or learning a musical instrument but can be dangerous and lead to injury.

I believe that doing only one kind of activity – just sport or just art can be bad. Therefore, they should have a chance to do both and a balance of sport and cultural activities is best.