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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Please help me with this.

Hi teachers. I'm writing a script. And this is a start of a scene:

Seated at a table in a restaurant with a friend, Stephanie's had her meal interrupted by a phone call from her boyfriend.

Stephanie: Honey, I know, but can't it wait till I get home. I'll call you back, ok? Love you. Bye.

Stephanie hangs up.

Is it correct to say 'Stephanie's had her meal interrupted.' when she's still talking?

  

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Stage directions are written in the present tense (you correctly wrote 'Stephanie hangs up'), so you need to write 'Stephanie has her meal interrupted by a phone call from her boyfriend'.

  • Stage directions are written in the present tense (you correctly wrote 'Stephanie hangs up'), so you need to write 'Stephanie has her meal interrupted by a phone call from her boyfriend'.
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Stage directions are written in the present tense (you correctly wrote 'Stephanie hangs up'), so you need to write

'Stephanie has her meal interrupted by a phone call from her boyfriend'.

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Don't use the contraction. There is no reason to in stage directions, and it looks unprofessional. Other than that, it is right.

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