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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Please help me with these sentences

1) My ego tells me to act according to reality that in my id would tell me Emotion: no.

2) My ego unconsciously decides what to do whether this thing is right or wrong.

3) There is an ongoing battle between id and ego in order to dominate.

4) My ego comes from my reaction with the world ( what I learn, read or experience.)

5) My id is has been formed to my life since I was a child.


Are they grammatically correct?

  

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I'll try to correct these, making as few changes as I can . 1) My ego tells me to act according to reality that in my id would tell me I don't know what you are trying to say. 2) My ego unconsciously decides what to do and whether this thing is right or wrong.

  • I'll try to correct these, making as few changes as I can .
  • 1) My ego tells me to act according to reality that in my id would tell me I don't know what you are trying to say.
  • 2) My ego unconsciously decides what to do and whether this thing is right or wrong.
  • 3) There is an ongoing battle between id and ego in order to dominate.
  • OK, but not great.
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I'll try to correct these, making as few changes as I can.

1) My ego tells me to act according to reality that in my id would tell me I don't know what you are trying to say.

2) My ego unconsciously decides what to do and whether this thing is right or wrong.

3) There is an ongoing battle between id and ego in order to dominate. OK, but not great.

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