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The graph illustrates changes in the proportion of four types of national access technology used in each UK household from 1996/97 to 2002/03.

Overall, It can be noticeable from the chart that all the trends were upward considerably when CD player are the most common devices through the period and a significant rise in using mobile phone.

In 1996/97, CD player had the highest proportion of British users at approximately 60 percent, while Home computer was just under 30 percent lower. At the end of the period, CD player rose steadily and ended up at above 80 percent. The outlay of Internet access began operating in 1998/99 with 10 percent and became the less modern access spent in homes in the 7-year term.

It is interesting to notice that only the percentage of British people using mobile phone had a remarkable fluctuation despite still being an upward trend. The percentage was nearly 20 percent in 1996/97 and stood at 70 percent at the end of the period, becoming the most second device used.