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My name´s Jana Kralova. I´m from Czech Republic, I live in Prague.
I´m 30 years old. I have a birthday on 20 of November.
I work as economist for hospital. I learn English for my job and travel.
I like music and sports. I listen rock. I like cooking and relaxing. In my free time I sometimes go to the cinema or theather.
I am married. I have one son. His name is John. He is 7 years old. He is very nice. He studies in a primary school. He likes athletics and swimming, listening music and reading books.
My husband works as doctor. His name is Jack and he is 30 years old. I am very happy, my family is super, I love them very much.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

Here are some edits and improvements.

Your writing is not bad. To improve it, you need to work on joining some of your short sentences into more complex ones.

eg Instead of 'I have a brother. He is a lawyer.' say 'I have a brother who is a lawyer.'

Please note this error that you have made a few times.

eg I'm from Britain, I live in Canada.

People sometimes write this way informally.

However, in strict terms, it is an error.

You need to write it as two separate sentences, or join them with a conjunction.

eg I'm from Britain. I live in Canda.

eg I'm from Britain, and I live in Canada.

The error is commonly called a 'run-on sentence', because one sentence just runs on into another.

It's a common error, so I recommend that you try to avoid making it a habit.

My name´s Jana Kralova. I´m from the Czech Republic, and I live in Prague.
I´m 30 years old. My birthday is the 20th of November.
I work as an economist for a hospital. I learn English for my job and travel.
I like music and sports. I listen to rock. I like cooking and relaxing. In my free time I sometimes go to the cinema or theatre.
I am married, and I have one son, named John. He is 7 years old, and he is very nice. He is in primary school. He likes athletics and swimming, listening to music and reading books.
My husband works as a doctor. His name is Jack and he is 30 years old. I am very happy,because my family is super. I love them very much.

Best wishes, Clive

Lostris · Answer

Hi, Clive!
Thank you very much

Lostris · Answer

Hi, Clive!
Thank you very much

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