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Bambi2008 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Please help me with the sentence?

I have completed online courses and i will need to notify my manager,

"Dear Mr.X,

This is to inform you that all of the mandatory online courses have been completed from my side , I will share the certificates with the HR departments"

Is this grammatically correct , as i have completed the courses i obtained training certificates and my manager advised me to notify him once they are completed and to share the certificates with the HR departments afterwards.

  

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I would replace the comma with a period, because these clauses are not really connected. So: This is to inform you that all of the mandatory online courses have been completed from my side. I will share the certificates with the HR departments" But the part "courses have been completed from my side" is written in the passive voice, which sounds unnatural here.

  • I would replace the comma with a period, because these clauses are not really connected.
  • So: This is to inform you that all of the mandatory online courses have been completed from my side.
  • I will share the certificates with the HR departments" But the part "courses have been completed from my side" is written in the passive voice, which sounds unnatural here.
  • English speakers tend to prefer the active voice ("have completed the courses").
  • " —George Orwell, "Politics and the English Language," Something like this: This is to inform you that I have been completed all of the mandatory online courses.
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I would replace the comma with a period, because these clauses are not really connected. So:

This is to inform you that all of the mandatory online courses have been completed from my side. I will share the certificates with the HR departments"

But the part "courses have been completed from my side" is written in the passive voice, which sounds unnatural

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