Please help me with the IELTS writing task 2

Please help me with the IELTS writing task 2

TOPIC: It is widely believed that natural disasters have been increasing and having a detrimental impact on our planet. Why is this the case and what could be done to minimize the effects?

In the present age, climate change as well as natural disasters are a huge threat to human beings, even though they occurred more and more around the world that many scientists can’t predict. Whether there are solutions which decline these problems or not remains controversial.

On top of that, It is easy to realise that temperature worldwide is keeping on an alarming level. Scientists about the environment warmed citizens of the danger of heat geothermal. These negative causes by Gas emissions from factories, burning fossil fuels and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to poor-air quality. To solve this polluted issue, the government should introduce laws that ban factories releasing emission into the air and must pay the fine if they are in violation. Besides that, alternative resources of energy and electricity public transport should be encouraged to use instead of toxic material. Thanks to Covid-19 pandemic, people have to be lockdown, stay at home day by day, and the environment is dramatically improved and a good process.

The second natural disaster I want to mention is year-round drought, flood and soil erosion. They caused considerable damage to the citizens in the country which suffered from these disasters. The reason is that some people consciously collected valuable trees for high profit, even burned large areas in order to build residential areas. In my own opinion, the Nation can stop this case by investing more money in conservation forest such as restoring the protection forest as well as increasing security. In addition, local leaders should organize reforestation sessions.

In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must understand the harmful impact they have on the environment and be responsible to ease damage.