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Nikoer30127 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me with the ad. Your revision will be published!

Hi! I'm actually translating an ad, but can any English trs. help me write or revise it to be more like an interesting ad?

For example:

1. Change any hair style as you wish-------changes to ----> Free Style ( more like an ad, but it must be understandable)

What will you write for this sentence?

2. Only for you------------?

3. Easy and simple to use--------------?

4. Ideal and shiny hair

5. Promote the quality of hair coloring. Having a pleasant time while dying hair.------------?

6. The insistence of the best and quality hair coloring-----------------?

One more last sentence: Please change the first letters of the word in this sentence which should be capitalized or small letters.

" Assistance To Elders and People With Disabilities Who Are Out On Business."

Thank you very much! Your revision will be part of the publishment of a book.
  

Top answer

Let me follow you.... 2. one of a kind 3.

  • Let me follow you....
  • 2.
  • one of a kind 3.
  • inaccessible---i don't know is it right
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Let me follow you....

2. Only for you------------?one of a kind

3. Easy and simple to use--?inaccessible---i don't know is it right
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It's about a hair salon ad! Thanks for you input anway!! :-)

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