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0 May 11, 2005 02br
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00Dear Mr. And Mrs. Smith 02br
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00My name is Diana Marcela Giraldo, I am an International Business student at Eafit University in Medellin, Colombia. I am currently in my ninth semester and I am very interested in doing an internship in the United States. 02br
00I am writing to you because my uncle, Oscar Giraldo, told me you can help me achieve this goal. 02br
00The reason why I want to do an internship period in the United States is because I know I would learn a lot of new thing to deepen my professional development and it would also enrich my personal life with the experiences you get from living in a different country and relating with people from other cultures. 02br
00During my university studies I have obtained good grades, in some opportunities I have been awarded scholarships from the university and I am among the best students of my class. I have worked very hard to accomplish all these and my objective is to continue learning, that is why I wish to do an internship in the number one country of the world. 02br
00Thank you for your time and consideration. I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your review. 02br
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00Yours sincerely, 02br
00Diana Marcela Giraldo. 02br
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