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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

please help me with some phrases

are they correct?


I have already started to write my diploma thesis for my economic studies on the topic of water privatisation. I will finish my studies of International Development at the end of next semester.

An internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to enhance my knowledges in the field of interdisciplinary research. I am interested in the internship on sociology of culture because the studies of International Development concentrate exactly on sociology, intercultural communication and sociocultural development, beside the main focus on development theory / policy / economics / planning and management.


thank you!


  

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Sorry, I changed the second part: As studies of International Development concentrate on scientific research and practice I can be a great support for your team. An internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to enhance my knowledges in the field of interdisciplinary research. Beside the fact that the studies of International Development mainly focus on development theory / policy / economics / planning and management, they also get into sociology, intercultural communication and sociocultural development.

  • Sorry, I changed the second part: As studies of International Development concentrate on scientific research and practice I can be a great support for your team.
  • An internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to enhance my knowledges in the field of interdisciplinary research.
  • Beside the fact that the studies of International Development mainly focus on development theory / policy / economics / planning and management, they also get into sociology, intercultural communication and sociocultural development.
  • Therefore I am greatly interested to enhance my knowledge through the internship specializing on sociology of culture.
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Sorry, I changed the second part:

As studies of International Development concentrate on scientific research and practice I can be a great support for your team. An internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to enhance my knowledges in the field of interdisciplinary research. Beside the fact that the studies of International Development mainly focus on development theory /

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