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TOPIC:

Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.

Do you agree or disagree?

Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is undeniable that entertainment always plays an important role in our lives. Such games, films, music,... almost they give us the most authentic feelings and moods. Nevertheless, some people think that entertainers like film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. And I disagree with this opinion.
Let us start by considering the fact why some people were jealous of others' success. Probably they regarded the entertainment as a normal, boring thing and it is unworthy with high salaries. This thought often came from people who were always in an attempt to earn much money but could not achieve that, hence they usually compared with the gladsome of others well-known people and suppose it is unfair.
However, the second thing that needs to be said is those stars also earn the money like we are doing. They had experienced such standstills or obstacles which interfered with the way to success. Famous people usually pass ardousion before reach the top. So they are deserved to gain the esteem of everyone with a high standard of life for their effort.
Moving to the next part, we also have to think about which other types of job should be highly paid. As far as I am concerned, the jobs that deserved to gain a lot of money are dangerous. These occupations for instance: sweeper, skyscraper builders, doctors,... They are related to human lives due to the risk that can emerge every time.
Taken everything into consideration, we need to get apparent information whenever appropriate others earning. All jobs are good and different, you would be highly paid if you are dedicated and have a sensible mindset.