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The line chart gives information about the percentages of people who were unemployed in Japan and the US from March 1993 to March 1999. As can be seen from the graph, in comparison with the figure for Japan, which experienced an upward trend, that of the US fell dramatically.

Between March 1993 and March 1996, the proportion of unemployed people in the US decreased considerably from 7% to 5.5% despite some oscillations. During the next three-year period, this figure remained relatively stable at 5.0% till the end of the period.

During the first period of two years, the percentage of people without jobs in Japan rose from only 2.5% in 1993 to over 3.5% in 1994, reaching a plateau till the end of 1995. One year later, there was a sharp increase in the proportion of the unemployed in Japan, with the figure reaching 4.5% in 1996. In the last two years, this figure hit the peak at just over 5% before declined negligibly and became equivalent to that of the US at the end of the period in question.