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Ngan Ho Posted 11 years ago
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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is true that school leaders around the world are experiencing difficulty with students’ serious behavior problems. There could be several reasons for this, and I think school leaders, societies and parents can take step to mitigate this issue.
In modern world, there are three possible explanations for behavior problems in students. One reason is the lack of care among parents and other members in family during the period of children’s development. Clearly, it is the family weak tie that makes them feel disconnected, and easily learn bad behaviors from bad friends. Another contributing factor is the explosion of violent content via the mass media or video games. In fact, nearly two – thirds of TV programs and most video games contain physical violence. In addition to this, the period of transition for teenager can cause bad behaviors due to the hormonal changes inside their bodies.
The situation calls for prompt actions. One measure would be that parents should spend more time for their children at each developmental stages to guide, encourage and share. It is obvious that if students are received good guiding and encourage from their families, this will help them develop properly both physical and mental health. Another sustainable solution is that schools should increase moral lessons and have more discussion about developmental psychology of their age in order for them to behave well at school. Finally, programs on mass media should be strictly censored to protect young children from violent content.
In conclusion, it is unavoidable that students will have several behavioral problems during developmental stages before they become mature in the future. However, I believe that if family and society fulfill their basic needs for love and sympathy, children will know how to behave properly with other people.
  

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It is true that school leaders around the world are experiencing difficulty with students’ serious behavior problems. There could be several reasons for this, and I think school leaders, societies and parents can take step s to mitigate this issue . In the modern world, there are three possible explanations for behavior problems in students.

  • It is true that school leaders around the world are experiencing difficulty with students’ serious behavior problems.
  • There could be several reasons for this, and I think school leaders, societies and parents can take step s to mitigate this issue .
  • In the modern world, there are three possible explanations for behavior problems in students.
  • One reason is the lack of care among parents and other members in the family during the period of children’s the child's development.
  • Clearly, it is the family 's weak tie s that makes them feel disconnected, and easily learn bad behaviors from bad friends.
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It is true that school leaders around the world are experiencing difficulty with students’ serious behavior problems. There could be several reasons for this, and I think school leaders, societies and parents can take steps to mitigate this issue.
In the modern world, there are three possible explanations for behavior problems in students. One reason is the lack of car
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I'm preparing for my Ielts test on my own. Therefore I really appreciate your help.
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Ngan HoI'm preparing for my Ielts test on my own. Therefore I really appreciate your help.
Good luck. Keep posting so you will have feedback on your progress.
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This is my new essay. Have a look at it. Thank you Emotion: big smile
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When you have a new essay, make a new thread. That way, more teachers can comment.

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Thank you. By the way, how can I make a new thread cuz I'm not familiar with the features on this website.
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Ngan Ho By the way, how can I make a new thread cuz I'm not familiar with the features on this website.
The same way you started this thread
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Ngan HoIn many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?It is true that school leaders around the world are experiencing difficulty with students’ serious behavior problems. There could be several reasons for this, and I think school leaders, societies and parents can take step to
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Thanks. I did seperate my essays, but maybe they aren't clearly displayed on your computer
I'll post them again.

Ngan Ho:

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is true that school leaders around t
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Ngan HoThank you. By the way, how can I make a new thread
Go to this page and click on "Write a new post"

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