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My topic: The map
below show recent changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revalent.

My essay:

Two maps below indicates the differences in Shipsmouth city over a period of 15 years. Overall, the city changed a lot aspects in terms of moderlization, accommadation and transportation.

The most conspicuous adjustion can easily be seen from those maps is transportation. In 1995 , in the Southeast corner of the city was blanketed by alot of trees but 15 years later, trees were cut down and transformed into a major airport whereas two buildings alocated above the forest were abolished and high skycraper was built up. At the city centre, in 1995 there was just only a station and in the next 15 years a new one was established and opposite to the old one.

The traffic road in city centre was turned into the walking street while a football stadium was built on the ground nearby the old station. The building which used to be a factory was destroyed a shopping centre was constructed. In the northwest corner of the city was a complex of apartments but in 1995 it was totally nothing more than a big fresh green jungle.