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Graduated from a local university in Malaysia with a degree in Economics, I had secured a job for myself in *** Company as an administration officer. Working in *** was an eye opener with constant motivation and involvement in sales co-ordination. During this period of stay, I have developed a very strong interest in sales and marketing. Although I work as an administration officer in Philips but I tend to participate in most of the road shows and promotions. I even did some self studies by reading some of the Marketing books. Personally I am a person with constant motivation and drive to move forward and I found that Marketing is very demanding and challenging which suit my character very well. As, I would want to strengthen myself with a strong base of Marketing and I find that the Marketing course offered by your university is exactly what I needed.

I know that having marketing as my postgraduate program will provides distinct advantages for my future career and moving me forward towards reaching my goals. I would definitely want to see myself move up the hierarchy and somewhere towards accomplishing my goal as a Marketing manager in the near future. By engaging in continuous education I hope to become a valuable asset to my employer. This value will allow me the flexibility to take on business challenges and help me to become a well-rounded individual and an asset to society. Staying challenged competitive and ethical would continue to create value not only for myself, but also for my employer, family and society.

I am very aware of the excellent reputation of your university; It would, therefore be a privileged to be able to secure admission to pursue postgraduate studies in your university and I am confident that I can match your high standards set by your university. I will do my best to earn good results and grades. I am confident that I will make the University proud to have me as their alumni.
  

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[Having g]raduated from a local university in Malaysia with a degree in Economics, I [] secured a job [at] *** Company as an administration officer. Working in *** was an eye opener with constant motivation and involvement in sales co-ordination. [don't understand what you are trying to say] During this period of stay, I have developed a very strong interest in sales and marketing.

  • [Having g]raduated from a local university in Malaysia with a degree in Economics, I [] secured a job [at] *** Company as an administration officer.
  • Working in *** was an eye opener with constant motivation and involvement in sales co-ordination.
  • [don't understand what you are trying to say] During this period of stay, I have developed a very strong interest in sales and marketing.
  • Although I work as an administration officer in Philips[,] I tend to participate in most of the road shows and promotions.
  • I even did some self studies by reading some [] [m]arketing books.
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[Having g]raduated from a local university in Malaysia with a degree in Economics, I [] secured a job [at] *** Company as an administration officer. Working in *** was an eye opener with constant motivation and involvement in sales co-ordination. [don't understand what you are trying to say] During this period of stay, I have developed a very strong interest in sales and marketing. Although I wor

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