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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me with my Motivation Letter
Hello!
Could anyone help me with this motivation letter? Grammar, sentence formation, punctuations, quotation marks etc.
Please.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled to commence in September 2014.
Currently, I am studying Construction Technology & Management at NIT Warangal. In my pursuit to master’s I have gained a profound academic profile and hope to continue even in a better way.
My professional goal is to build a set up which would practice an excellent management in all the projects it undertakes. Also, I concieve to endorse ‘Sustainable Development’ through this set up. Your programme will ensure turning my passion into profession. For this reason I would like to take advantage of this priceless opportunity. It would be a privilege to enlighten under your fine guidance.
The first time I realised my passion for construction management was when I assisted my father at his construction site in managing resources, controlling activities and monitoring quality of work during my graduation years. I percieved how an effective management plays life-line to any project. It triggered a keen intrest into me towards construction management. This urge eventually brought home the bacon in the form of top score in first semester of my master’s. Also, I have been organizing events and trips in my undergraduation and received significant praise for my ability to solve problems intellactually and to decide sagely in unforeseen situations.
An another reason which makes me more suitable for this programme is my love towards languages. I remained a scorer in the languages during academics. Due to the grasp in English I was selected as a member of Editorial Committee in my undergraduate and graduate institutions. Award for Proficiency in English makes it even more evident.
I have known Spain by it’s bull fighting, football, food, ‘La Tomatina’ and acquainted with it’s geography, culture through cinema which I would like to experience live. Music stimulated an inceptive liking for Spanish and I will take every opportunity to learn Spanish and Galician. Living, studying and having enjoyment with international scholars would broaden my horizons and will help me to forward culture and customs to our continent.
I would be very grateful if you consider my application and give me a chance to learn under your expertise which would mark my professional and personal development.
Thank You.
Yours Sincerely,
Kunal Mangal
Could anyone help me with this motivation letter? Grammar, sentence formation, punctuations, quotation marks etc.
Please.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled to commence in September 2014.
Currently, I am studying Construction Technology & Management at NIT Warangal. In my pursuit to master’s I have gained a profound academic profile and hope to continue even in a better way.
My professional goal is to build a set up which would practice an excellent management in all the projects it undertakes. Also, I concieve to endorse ‘Sustainable Development’ through this set up. Your programme will ensure turning my passion into profession. For this reason I would like to take advantage of this priceless opportunity. It would be a privilege to enlighten under your fine guidance.
The first time I realised my passion for construction management was when I assisted my father at his construction site in managing resources, controlling activities and monitoring quality of work during my graduation years. I percieved how an effective management plays life-line to any project. It triggered a keen intrest into me towards construction management. This urge eventually brought home the bacon in the form of top score in first semester of my master’s. Also, I have been organizing events and trips in my undergraduation and received significant praise for my ability to solve problems intellactually and to decide sagely in unforeseen situations.
An another reason which makes me more suitable for this programme is my love towards languages. I remained a scorer in the languages during academics. Due to the grasp in English I was selected as a member of Editorial Committee in my undergraduate and graduate institutions. Award for Proficiency in English makes it even more evident.
I have known Spain by it’s bull fighting, football, food, ‘La Tomatina’ and acquainted with it’s geography, culture through cinema which I would like to experience live. Music stimulated an inceptive liking for Spanish and I will take every opportunity to learn Spanish and Galician. Living, studying and having enjoyment with international scholars would broaden my horizons and will help me to forward culture and customs to our continent.
I would be very grateful if you consider my application and give me a chance to learn under your expertise which would mark my professional and personal development.
Thank You.
Yours Sincerely,
Kunal Mangal
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Hi Kunal;; There are many places where the vocabulary and usage is very awkward. The yellow highlighted words are not correct. Dear Sir or Madam : I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for the Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at the University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled to commence in September 2014.
- Hi Kunal;; There are many places where the vocabulary and usage is very awkward.
- The yellow highlighted words are not correct.
- Dear Sir or Madam : I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for the Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at the University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled to commence in September 2014.
- Currently, I am studying Construction Technology & Management at NIT Warangal.
- In my pursuit of the master’s degree, I have gained a profound academic profile and hope to continue in even in a better way.
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Hi Kunal;;
There are many places where the vocabulary and usage is very awkward.
The yellow highlighted words are not correct.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for the Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at the University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled
There are many places where the vocabulary and usage is very awkward.
The yellow highlighted words are not correct.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to you to express my intrest in applying for the Master’s Programme of ‘Project Management’ at the University of Santiago de Compostela scheduled
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