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SlowPoke Posted 14 years ago
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Please help me with my motivation letter.
Hi, my name is Alaa
I'm applying for a bachelors degree in Hamburg University
and this is my letter of motivation
if any one can read it and edit it for me or offer any suggestions that would be greatly appreciated
I also have a concern about the header or where to put the addresses and my personal details
thank you guys for your time and help in advance
My name
Address
Country
Email
Date
University name
Address
Country
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am applying for the bachelor's degree program in Information Engineering, because I know your program will provide me with the practical knowledge and solid theoretical foundation from which I will be able to launch the career I desire. I’m excited to study the most up to date curriculum in a progressive environment, and to have the chance to work with professors knowledgeable in the most recent innovations in the field of IE.
I have been interested in computers since at the age of 7 I took apart my first PC and put it back together again. At 14 I was building nearly 3 computers a day, from the ground up, and began paid, freelance work with Photoshop and computer programming. In secondary school I graduated with physics and mathematics as my majors, and obtained excellent test scores in my examinations. However, since education in Egypt is not appreciated as much as work experience, I spent these years devoting more of my attention to my work rather than my grades.
I chose to study at Shorouk Academy, my current college in Egypt, hoping it would prepare me for the future I desired. However, I quickly discovered there that most of the curriculum is outdated and I will not be able to apply my learning there to a realistic job. El Shorouk has been a decent starting point for entering the field, but my goals in computer science and engineering will likely not be met by their limited program.
One aspect of the program at HAW I am looking forward to above all is the 20 week compulsory internship, wherein I can earn practical skills for my career. Although it is not a requirement of the program, I am also excited to learn the German language and appreciate German culture. After graduation, I hope to live and work in Germany where I can apply the skills HAW will have provided me with to a fulfilling career working with the most up-to-date technologies and ideas.
I am certain that HAW will offer me a superior program that will help me to excel in the career that I truly desire. I look forward to proving my capabilities and devoting myself to learning the modern and innovative curriculum at HAW. Upon graduation, I would be thrilled to have the opportunity to work in Germany and contribute to the German industry, applying what I will learn at HAW to my future profession.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
Sincerely,
I'm applying for a bachelors degree in Hamburg University
and this is my letter of motivation
if any one can read it and edit it for me or offer any suggestions that would be greatly appreciated
I also have a concern about the header or where to put the addresses and my personal details
thank you guys for your time and help in advance
My name
Address
Country
Date
University name
Address
Country
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am applying for the bachelor's degree program in Information Engineering, because I know your program will provide me with the practical knowledge and solid theoretical foundation from which I will be able to launch the career I desire. I’m excited to study the most up to date curriculum in a progressive environment, and to have the chance to work with professors knowledgeable in the most recent innovations in the field of IE.
I have been interested in computers since at the age of 7 I took apart my first PC and put it back together again. At 14 I was building nearly 3 computers a day, from the ground up, and began paid, freelance work with Photoshop and computer programming. In secondary school I graduated with physics and mathematics as my majors, and obtained excellent test scores in my examinations. However, since education in Egypt is not appreciated as much as work experience, I spent these years devoting more of my attention to my work rather than my grades.
I chose to study at Shorouk Academy, my current college in Egypt, hoping it would prepare me for the future I desired. However, I quickly discovered there that most of the curriculum is outdated and I will not be able to apply my learning there to a realistic job. El Shorouk has been a decent starting point for entering the field, but my goals in computer science and engineering will likely not be met by their limited program.
One aspect of the program at HAW I am looking forward to above all is the 20 week compulsory internship, wherein I can earn practical skills for my career. Although it is not a requirement of the program, I am also excited to learn the German language and appreciate German culture. After graduation, I hope to live and work in Germany where I can apply the skills HAW will have provided me with to a fulfilling career working with the most up-to-date technologies and ideas.
I am certain that HAW will offer me a superior program that will help me to excel in the career that I truly desire. I look forward to proving my capabilities and devoting myself to learning the modern and innovative curriculum at HAW. Upon graduation, I would be thrilled to have the opportunity to work in Germany and contribute to the German industry, applying what I will learn at HAW to my future profession.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
Sincerely,
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