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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me with my motivatin letter
I had to write a motivation letter to Leiden University. Please give me some suggestions
Thank you very much for your effort!
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with your Master Program in International Relations and Diplomacy starting 2008, for which I would like to apply.
I graduated with a Bachelor degree in International Relations in 2005 from , . Since my goal is to become a diplomat and to deal with issues connected to International Relations and Diplomacy, I am going to continue my education towards the Master's Degree.
The emphasis of my studies is to understand the fundamental principles of international relations. As an addition, I also learned about Diplomacy and Negotiation, Foreign Policy Analysis, and issues related to international relations, such as: gender studies in world politics. All these has enhance my knowledge about what is happening in the world, what are the impacts (especially to our country), and then how to deal with it.
Finally, I strongly wish to participate in this program; and believe that the combination of my working experience is well-suited to the Master’s degree position you describe. Please find enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae with additional information about my qualifications.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
Franky C. L. Silalahi
Thank you very much for your effort!
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with your Master Program in International Relations and Diplomacy starting 2008, for which I would like to apply.
I graduated with a Bachelor degree in International Relations in 2005 from , . Since my goal is to become a diplomat and to deal with issues connected to International Relations and Diplomacy, I am going to continue my education towards the Master's Degree.
The emphasis of my studies is to understand the fundamental principles of international relations. As an addition, I also learned about Diplomacy and Negotiation, Foreign Policy Analysis, and issues related to international relations, such as: gender studies in world politics. All these has enhance my knowledge about what is happening in the world, what are the impacts (especially to our country), and then how to deal with it.
Finally, I strongly wish to participate in this program; and believe that the combination of my working experience is well-suited to the Master’s degree position you describe. Please find enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae with additional information about my qualifications.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
Franky C. L. Silalahi
Top answer
I have corrected what you have posted. I feel that your letter needs one more paragraph (in the position marked ' P ' below) to provide more specific detail of why this MA is important for you and why the Leiden MA is specifically appropriate to your needs. Please check Leiden's website ] Program in International Relations and Diplomacy starting 2008, for which I would like to apply.
- I have corrected what you have posted.
- I feel that your letter needs one more paragraph (in the position marked ' P ' below) to provide more specific detail of why this MA is important for you and why the Leiden MA is specifically appropriate to your needs.
- Please check Leiden's website ] Program in International Relations and Diplomacy starting 2008, for which I would like to apply.
- I graduated with a bachelor's degree in International Relations in 2005 from Padjadjaran University, Bandung, Indonesia.
- Since my goal is to become a diplomat and to deal with issues associated with international relations , I intend to pursue a master's degree in that field.
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I have corrected what you have posted. I feel that your letter needs one more paragraph (in the position marked 'P' below) to provide more specific detail of why this MA is important for you and why the Leiden MA is specifically appropriate to your needs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with your Master's [?Please check Leiden'
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with your Master's [?Please check Leiden'
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