Please help me with my ielts writing task 1

The graph compares males and females in terms of how many books they read at Burnaby public library between 2011 2014.

Overall, from 2011 to 2013, there were more books which were read by women than by men. However, women’s reading fell to below the level of men after 2013.

There were different trends for men and women. Women started off reading more books than men, 5,000 books compared with just 3,000 books. The figure for books read by women grew gradually between 2011 and 2013 and reached a peak at the end of this period (over 10,000 books); meanwhile the increase in reading of men had been more steady, from about 3,000 to the same level of women (10,000) by 2013.

After that, the number of men rose dramatically to 14,000 books in 2014, this was the highest number shown on the chart. By contrast, the reading figure for women dropped suddenly to roughly 7,000 books at the end of the 4-year period.

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