Please help me with my ielts task1 map essay.

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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The two layouts of a health centre in 2005 and the present day illustrate the changes that have been made during the intervening years.

The health centre is organized into a main facility in the center, surrounded by a garden and a parking lot which are separated by two fences. The major updates are the decreases in the size of the garden and nearly all the rooms in the facility, expanding the parking lot and adding a new large minor operation and a children’s play area.

The main entrance to the building is moved from the center of the south side to the southwest corner, where the play area for children is added. In front of the entrance is the parking lot, which has more than twice as many spaces in 2005, 30 versus 12. The locations of the physiotherapy, in the southeast corner, and the office, in the south side, have not been changed. However, the reception desk was relocated just inside the west of the entrance. All the rooms have doors opening to the reception area, which has seating for patients; the seating capacity increased from 11 seats in 2005 to 17. In addition, there are four consulting rooms, compared to three in 2005, but these rooms became smaller. The building increased in size, by converting the garden on the northwest side to a minor operations room.

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The two layouts of a health centre in 2005 and the present day illustrate the changes that have been made during the intervening years.

The health centre is one building ~~organized into a main facility in the center~~, ("in the center" does not make sense. "organized" is not a good word. "organize" refers to objects that can easily be sorted or moved around.) My files are not well organized. The school curriculum is organized into six subject areas.) surrounded by a garden and a parking lot which are separated by two fences. The major updates are the decreases in the size of the garden and nearly all the rooms in the facility, expanding the parking lot and adding a new large minor operation and a children’s play area.

That is an extremely clumsy and awkward sentence. It is very difficult to follow. Your essay's cohesion and coherence could be improved substantially.

Overall, outside the building, large sections of the garden area was paved over to make room for more parking, and some of it was enclosed to make a new minor operations room.. In the interior, there were modifications to every room in the building except the physiotherapy room.

In detail, the main entrance to the building was is moved (The updates are completed, so you have to use past tense.) from the center of the south side to the southwest corner, where the play area for children is added. In front of the entrance is the parking lot, which has more than twice as many spaces as it did in 2005, 30 versus 12. The locations of the physiotherapy, in the southeast (wrong word) corner, and the office, in the south (wrong word) side, have not been changed. However, the reception desk was relocated just inside the west of the entrance. All the rooms have doors opening to the reception area, which has seating for patients; the seating capacity increased from 11 seats in 2005 to 17. In addition, there are four consulting rooms, compared to three in 2005, but these rooms are ~~became~~ smaller. The building increased in size, by converting the garden on the northwest side to a minor operations room.

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AlpheccaStars · Answer

The two maps, one for 2005 and the other for the present day, depict a health centre, showing numerous modifications that have been made. The facility is one building surrounded by a parking area and gardens designed around a central reception area.

Overall, outside the building, large sections of the garden area were paved over to make room for more parking, and the northwest section wa

Overall, outside the building, large sections of the garden area were paved over to make room for more parking, and the northwest section was enclosed to make a new minor operations room. In the interior, there were modifications to every room in the building except the physiotherapy room.

In detail, the gardens on the west side are now a parking lot and the south side lot was extended so there are 30 spaces compared to 12. Also the building is now a square; the northwest garden area was enclosed. The main entrance moved from the south to the southwest corner, and the reception area now has a play area for children. There are more consulting rooms, four as compared to three, but they are smaller. The basic layout did not change; all the rooms still open onto the central atrium.

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