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The two pie charts, one in 2005 and the other in 2015, show the percentages of workers by the means that they use to get to work (driving, carpool, bus, cycling, walking and working at home) in the City of Rockingham.
Overall, in both years, the three most common ways to get to work were driving alone in a car, carpooling, and taking a bus. This order did not change even though there were some significant increases and decreases. In contrast, walking was still the least popular method in both years.
In 2005, workers' most significant commuting method was to drive a car by themselves at 50%, which then fell to 35% in 2015. However, those using a carpool had an increase from 15% in 2005 to 20% in 2015. Getting to work by bus, by contrast, stayed constant in both years at 15%.
Cycling, one of the two least popular commuting methods, increased slightly from 5% to 10% in 2015. Working at home also rose marginally 5% from 10% to 15%. However, walking, which stayed the same in both years (5%), was still the least popular way to get to work.
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The two pie charts, one for in 2005 and the other for in 2015, show the percentages of workers by the means that they use to get to work (driving, carpool, bus, cycling, walking and working at home) in the City of Rockingham. Overall, in both years, the three most common ways to get to work were driving alone in a car, carpooling, and taking a bus. This order did not change even though there were some significant increases and decreases.
- The two pie charts, one for in 2005 and the other for in 2015, show the percentages of workers by the means that they use to get to work (driving, carpool, bus, cycling, walking and working at home) in the City of Rockingham.
- Overall, in both years, the three most common ways to get to work were driving alone in a car, carpooling, and taking a bus.
- This order did not change even though there were some significant increases and decreases.
- In contrast, walking was still the least popular method in both years.
- In 2005, the workers' most significant common commuting method was to drive a car by themselves at 50%, which then fell to 35% in 2015.
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The two pie charts, one for in 2005 and the other for in 2015, show the percentages of workers by the means that they use to get to work (driving, carpool, bus, cycling, walking and working at home) in the City of Rockingham.
Overall, in both years, the three most common ways to ge
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