Please help me with my IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

Part 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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The flow chart illustrates the manufacturing process of ethanol fuel from a new and environmentally-friendly source: corn.

After harvest-season, corn is kept in warehouses before being taken to grind. It needs to be stewed for 4 hours with water and then a 48 hour-fermenting process. Afterwards, the product will be distillated to remove hard and redundant substances. The liquid collected from distillation is the raw ethanol. At the end of the production, they package the purified fuel and prepare for transportation.

These data sources clearly communicate the progression of making a popular fuel from organic materials instead of non-renewable sources, which will set a big trend in the energy market in such a changing and exhausting world.

Part 2:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

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It is already set in people's minds that physical power takes priority in sport achievements for the time being. Otherwise, some people now argue that whether mental power is the key factor leading athletes to their goals in competion. I personally come to terms with the idea that these two aspects share the same role in one's success in all walks of life.

On the first hand, sport requires a robust body. It has become a tacit rule in every sport event that competitors must have a good state of health, even in Paralympics or Paragames. Although each sport stands in need of different kinds of strength, athletes have to to make sure that their body will not receive a stroke during competing time. That not only creates a safety insurance but also illustrates the main purpose of sport: encouraging people to become healthier.

On the other hand, a strong will could bring a normal to the top. The story of Nick Vujicic, a man owning the absence of arms and legs, is well-known all over the world when he manage his wonderful life like a normal person: swimming, playing football, cooking... and going around to inspire other disabled people. Had it not been for his excellent effort, he would have spent all his life depressing and blaming. Especially in sport, the role of spirit is much more significant, which could make a competitor shining with no fear of failure or exhaustion.

To sum up, I think that people should try to improve both physical and mental strength from an early age in order to manage their own living and become successful.

Thank you for helping me improve my writinggggggg <3