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Hai Duong Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me with my essay. Thank you so much.

Topic: Write an essay about your best friend

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Many people say that friendship stem from special and weird occasions. I am not an exception,my friend and I started a friendship in weird occasion. His name is Phuc and I met his insecondary and high school. Because of the distance between our houses is not too long so I cansee what he do in the garden. Once I saw him make a kind of machine, I ‘m curious so that Icame to his house in order to see it better. He saw and asked me that could I help him to build this. I laughed and we started to build it during the summer. That was the beginning of abeautiful friendship. There are two characters which I admire him most when I become to his friend.

The first one is his intelligence. He is one of the most intelligent students that I have known. His points of almost the subject are nearly one hundred percent, except from the Literature and Art. He can easily finish his homework in fifteen minutes while I spend two hours to finish it. Whenever our teacher teaches us new lesson, he has already known it yesterday and he can do a basic math of the new lesson. As I say before, He can build a machine from all the knowledge of the school. There is a patent contest in our school this year, we are planning to participate in that contest with his machine.

The second one is that Phuc is a shy person and I saw an example of his shyness once. There was campsite last year. At that night when we were having a BBQ, I saw him went into our tent so I followed him and asked him why he went along. I was surprised at the reason which he told. He saw a big creature in the afternoon and he was scared, he thought to talk with me but at that time I was helping other classmates to build a tent. He came to it and it turn out to be a little bug under the flashlight. Although he is too shy of these thing but when he present something serious in front of many people, he is very confident.

In conclusion, I am glad that I have him for my best friend. We support and help each other in any moment. He helps me with my study and I help him to be more confident which is the establishment to us to make this friendship better.

  

Top answer

Your essay is very good, except for the many grammatical errors. Most of these are the wrong form. For example, the present tense instead of past tense, and singular instead of plural.

  • Your essay is very good, except for the many grammatical errors.
  • Most of these are the wrong form.
  • For example, the present tense instead of past tense, and singular instead of plural.
  • There are also some incorrect vocabulary words.
  • Many people say that friendship (wrong form) stem from special and weird occasions.
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Your essay is very good, except for the many grammatical errors. Most of these are the wrong form. For example, the present tense instead of past tense, and singular instead of plural.
There are also some incorrect vocabulary words.



Many people say that friendship (wrong form) stem from special and weird occas

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