Please Help Me With My Essay - IELTS Task 1

The two maps illustrate Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015 after several changes to its infrastructure.

Overall, Pancha Village had been developed and the major improvements were the road expansion and the installation of cable system. Other changes were made to its buildings over time.

In 2005, Pancha Village was a deprived area with a very simple and small road. It was constructed into a wider, concrete one on which trucks and cars could move easily. Surface markings and traffic signs were also added to the road. On two sides of the road, there were houses, a market, schools and pagodas. Looking at the left part of the second picture, we can see a cable system along the road, which was connected to a base transceiver station and the houses nearby.

Houses and buildings along the road had some slight changes. The market, on the left side of the road, was rearranged in a neat and tidier way compared to it in 2005. Opposite the market were two pagodas and in 2015, another pagoda had been made to this place. Schools were also on the same road side with the pagoda. In 2005, there were two buildings of a primary school, which were reconstructed into three buidings of both primary and secondary school in 2015. Between the schools and the pagodas, there were three houses in 2005 and it remained only one in 2015.

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