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MY ESSAY:

The bar chart provides data on the share of the economy of country B held by five different business sectors in 2005 and 2015, with a forecast for 2025.

Overall, the dominant industry is finance at all these points of time, while food processing and manufacturing account for the smallest proportions. Three sectors experienced an increase in share, but most are expected to decrease in significance.

In 2005, Finance represented just over one-third of the economy, about 10% higher than the second-largest sector, Tourism, and Oil, coal and gas. In contrast, Food processing only contributed one-tenth, approximately half the proportion of Manufacturing.

By 2015, the largest increase occurred in Food processing, doubling to one-fifth. Finance, as well as Oil, coal and gas, had the same trend, but with approximately half the rise (6%). The other two areas experienced the opposite trend, decreasing by about 6%.

The forecast for 2025 shows that only Finance will continue its current growth, ending at about 42%. Tourism is expected to remain the same, whereas the percentage of Oil, coal and gas will slightly drop to about one quarter. The proportions of the other two industries are projected to fall by 11%.