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Topic: some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have a different views about we should study after high school or work. In my opinion, we can combine studying and working.

Nowadays, many parents and people think that the student must study all the time they free, and do not have any relax because the believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. If you want to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer, you must study hard because this job need many skills and knowledge. That is one of reason why parents always want their children must study hard, but the bad thing is many children become autism because they study too much and do not have any time to play with their friends or working .

On the other hand, I believe that we can combine studying and working, because when we study at university or college that is abstract concepts and we can not practice. Students can spend their free time to work part time, it is help students in many aspect. They will become more confident, know more skills, more than ever they are happy with the job they work. Study is not the only route to success because many people in the work still success without studying at university, but it not mean they do not learn, they learn skills about the people they meet. Life is an experiences, we should maintain reasonable working and studying time.

In conclusion, to suceess in the future, students should combine studying and working.