Please help me with my essay

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My topic: the maps below show the recent changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revalent

My essay:

The two maps below indicate the differences in Shipsmouth city over a period of 15 years. Overall, there were alot of changed aspect in terms of modernlization, transportation, and acommadation.

The most conspicuous changed part can be seen from the map is transportation. In the Southeast corner of city used to be covered by lots of trees but 15 years later trees were cut down and a major airport was contructed. Above the airport were Skycrapers which had been a block of two buildings. At city centre, a new station was built opposite to the old one. The pub alocated next to the skycrapers was changed from an old-age church.

The traffic road in the city centre was trasnfromed into road for walkers only, whereas a football stadium was built up on the ground next to the old station. The factory was abolished and turned into a shopping centre. The jungle in Northwest corner of the metropolitan was demontrated and the hole area became a complex block of accommadation.