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SellaW Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
PLEASE help me with my English paper thesis!
I need to know if this is a solid thesis or not. I haven't had a lot of input on it and I'm worried it's not strong enough.
" The narrative choices in We and THX-1138 present the view that emotions and unconformity are defects within society. However, the dual purpose of the novel and the film is to portray violence, lust and anger, as well as love, imagination and the desire for freedom as inevitable of human nature; together, these traits allow for the people of We and THX-1138 to maintain their individuality and avoid becoming mechanical in design."
From the novel We by Yevgeny Zamyatin and the film THX-1138 by George Lucas.
I'm worried I'm not being specific enough, or that it's too long and not concise. Please help!!
S
(that is my other post too; I didn't know how long it'd take to get sent through so I made an account. Sorry for the double post! This one's a bit more refined anyway)
" The narrative choices in We and THX-1138 present the view that emotions and unconformity are defects within society. However, the dual purpose of the novel and the film is to portray violence, lust and anger, as well as love, imagination and the desire for freedom as inevitable of human nature; together, these traits allow for the people of We and THX-1138 to maintain their individuality and avoid becoming mechanical in design."
From the novel We by Yevgeny Zamyatin and the film THX-1138 by George Lucas.
I'm worried I'm not being specific enough, or that it's too long and not concise. Please help!!
S
(that is my other post too; I didn't know how long it'd take to get sent through so I made an account. Sorry for the double post! This one's a bit more refined anyway)
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