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Learner_of_english Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help me with my cover letter

Hello,

I would like to apply for a position at Apple. I'm very keen to work into their company so I would prefer not mess up this letter.

I would be grateful to anyone who can check at least the first paragraph of my letter and tell me of there are any mistakes (grammatical or of expression).

Thanks a lot
Regards

Quote : "I am looking for an internship or a temporary contract in order to complete my MSc in Software Engineering from April to September 2009.

I am very keen to work with Apple, an American multinational company which designs and manufactures consumer electronics and software products. Apple’s image refers to aesthetic design, quality and comprehensive customers’ satisfaction which are values that I share. As your company is looking for innovative partners, my engineer background will be a positive value for your team.

I have strong skills in C/C++ and Java programming which I have expanded in the fields of information technologies and software engineering throughout my five-year studies. I also have an extensive knowledge in Mac OS X, UNIX and Windows operating systems.

During my internships, my responsibilities have included designing, coding and testing of programs/databases and writing documentations such as requirement specification and integration testing.

In addition, I have been directly in touch with users and customers which made me particularly sensitive to communication and analytical issues and to the development of software of quality responding to client’s needs."
  

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I am looking for an internship , or a temporary contract from April to September 2009, in order to complete my MSc in Software Engineering . from April to September 2009 . I am very keen to work with Apple, an American multinational company which who has a wonderful reputation for some of the best d esign and manufactures consumer electronics and software products in the business .

  • I am looking for an internship , or a temporary contract from April to September 2009, in order to complete my MSc in Software Engineering .
  • from April to September 2009 .
  • I am very keen to work with Apple, an American multinational company which who has a wonderful reputation for some of the best d esign and manufactures consumer electronics and software products in the business .
  • Apple’s image refers to aesthetic design, quality and comprehensive customers’ satisfaction , which are values that I share.
  • As your company is looking for innovative partners, my engineer ing background will would be a positive addition to value for your team.
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I am looking for an internship, or a temporary contract from April to September 2009, in order to complete my MSc in Software Engineering. from April to September 2009.

I am very keen to work with Apple, an American multinational company which who has a wonderful reputation for some of the best design and manufactures cons
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I think that your cover letter sounds awesome! I've been doing a lot of research on this, and it sounds to me like you have a winning cover letter! My husband is in IT as well, and recently landed a new position. It's one industry that still has a high job demand in this poor economy! I recently saw an article from my Lifescript.com newsletter about

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