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Education is the most important aspect of life in nowaday's world. Some countries have got a very strict system of education. A good example of it is Russian system of education which has been existed since the October Revolution. I myself studied according to this system and know its advantages and disadvantages. For example, my cousin lives in New Zealand and her children attend school there. And she feels strongly the difference between two systems of education.

I think the reason is that the Soviet system of education was developing during confrontation with Western World. The authority of this totalitarian country tried to do everything better than their bitter rivals and Russia is still keeping this system. For instance, my nephew now studies in the seventh form in the run -of -the mill school in Moscow. Every day he has about seven lessons and most of these lessons are connected with very difficult disciplines such as maths, physics, biology, chemistry, English and others. Every teacher gives about three or four tasks and as a result he has to fulfil about 20-30 task a day. Moreover, children are given task even during holiday. Almost every week children have to take a test and it is very stressful as the task are usually are quite difficult.

Unfortunately, there were some cases when children at the age of adolescence commit suicide and in their suicide notes they were saying that the reason is stress which they experienced due to inability to to cope with all homework.

If I were a minister of Education, I would reduce amount of subjects to five lessons a day. And only two task on every subjects can be five as homework.

Taking everything into consideration, I admit that studying is certainly necessary both for young people and the society. Nonetheless, too much studying is very stressful. So I believe that the most efficient way is to make an education system which is well-balanced between tension and relaxing.