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27joe Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me with my business proposal.. not sure with my english
Please help me edit this letter.... Thank you and I appreciate all your comments
Dear Sirs:
We want to thank you for giving us the opportunity to introduce to you the great advantages and uniqueness of the EPILETTE LADY. We’ve enclosed a leaflet, CD containing the artwork of the display stands and the pricelist.
Furthermore, we will be launching a new range of EPILETTE SPECIAL FACE and EPILETTE FOR MEN by end of the year. And we’re confident that the users will be satisfied because of its distinctive and simple application of the Epilette Hair Removal.
As soon as you give us your approval, please send us the LPO so that we could proceed with the delivery.
Again, thank you for your interest.
Sincerely Yours,
Dear Sirs:
We want to thank you for giving us the opportunity to introduce to you the great advantages and uniqueness of the EPILETTE LADY. We’ve enclosed a leaflet, CD containing the artwork of the display stands and the pricelist.
Furthermore, we will be launching a new range of EPILETTE SPECIAL FACE and EPILETTE FOR MEN by end of the year. And we’re confident that the users will be satisfied because of its distinctive and simple application of the Epilette Hair Removal.
As soon as you give us your approval, please send us the LPO so that we could proceed with the delivery.
Again, thank you for your interest.
Sincerely Yours,
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e We would like to thank you for giving us the opportunity to introduce our company..... (you should omit the the ff. words: to you, great advantages and uniqueness of the EPILLETE LADY and add them later on your second paragraph).
- e We would like to thank you for giving us the opportunity to introduce our company.....
- (you should omit the the ff.
- words: to you, great advantages and uniqueness of the EPILLETE LADY and add them later on your second paragraph).
- The Epilette Lady will be launching the new range of Epilitte Special Face for women and men at the end of the year.
- Enclosed herewith, please find the CD containing the artwork display stand as well the pricelist of the products.
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Here, you can use "would" make sense of will i.e We would like to thank you for giving us the opportunity to introduce our company..... (you should omit the the ff. words: to you, great advantages and uniqueness of the EPILLETE LADY and add them later on your second paragraph).
The Epilette Lady will be launching the new range of Epilitte Special Face for women and men at the end
The Epilette Lady will be launching the new range of Epilitte Special Face for women and men at the end
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now i can finalize it today.
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