Please help me with my advice letter(CAE)

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You have received the email below from your friend, Alex

Hi,

You know my 18-year-old daughter, Jane, wants to go to university? Well, she told me she’d applied to a university in another city. I’m worried about her living alone in a different city and I told her I didn’t want her to go. Do you think I’ve done the right thing? What would you have done? Do you think it’s a good idea for her to study away from home?

Alex

Reply to Alex’s email. Write about 220-260 words.

Hi Alex,

Hope everything goes well for you. Thank you for your letter, and of course I'd help you. Here some advice to solve your problem.
First of all you need to understand your daughter decision and help her to think about it again in case she would change her mind. Furthermore, you can gift her a bus tour to feel how to cooperate with herself without parental control. In addition, if I were you, I would try to give her an adaptation period to living in dormitory. Moreover, you can always call her whenever you want. The best advice is not to hinder her decision. Have you ever considered her self-reliant?
Secondly, living in another city is riveting experience. Personally, I had lived in Toronto for five years and that was astonishing. Living in another city or county is very useful skill that perove your ability to live alone without any problems. By the way, when I was living in Toronto I met innumerable language obstacles, because of the accent. Even though the language problems which was quite dreadful for me I met different people with whom I get on well for a long time. Let me know what you decide.
Take care,Jack